there is a darkness gathering
beyond the hills
below the trees
behind my eyes
I hear the shadows calling
the night birds
the dark stars
all the oldest elementals
stand together
this is our last chance
to bend
or else be broken
© Claire Griffin 2016
This was written a month ago, late at night, just before sleep. I’d been feeling low – and at first I thought the “darkness” referred to that. But as I wrote, I realised I was thinking of the environment, and imagining/sensing a mythic awakening of primal forces standing just out of sight.
I think there’s a connection to “winter wind – green gods” written a month earlier. Perhaps that imagining had naively called something forth, and they did not step back but were still standing with me in my subconscious.
That low, dark feeling stayed with me until the last couple of weeks. I’ve been reading about archetypes, hero journeys and the “shadow” (Jung) – and I’m wondering if the darkness I felt can be explained by some of this. I’ll keep reading. And while I’ve called this poem “darkness” – and I was sensing a warning while I wrote it, as if we were all being put on notice – somehow now I feel hopeful. (It was just after writing all this that I discovered a movement called “TreeSisters” and their initiative to plant a million trees https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RcDKjS5gIbM – I think this helped.)
Anyway, this dark mood has lifted now – that might be due to spring’s arrival, blossoms and light and birds circling the house. 6 October 2016)
Simply amazing
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thank you 🙂
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Great, the looming, the presentiment. I read it loud, that’s how I know :), and the images reinforce the mood.
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Thanks Steve – love that you read it aloud – that’s what I do – something about the rhythm and the sounds in the words that just have to fit together and sound right 🙂
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The flow of your words have rhythm. I happy to hear that the dark mood has passed..
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Thank you – yes – this one really seemed to write itself and just flowed … and yes feeling good now and looking back I think – was I really feeling that bad ?
Great to have your comments 😊❤️
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You’re welcome. It happens. It didn’t seem that bad to me. You were able to express your feelings with beautiful words. Your words helped me.
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Oh – thank you ❤️ that means so much – to know our words connect over such distances – that is the positive power of this digital world we live in.
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