standing at the sink
scrubbing rust
from a favourite baking tin
determined to reach through
to the hidden shine below
I can smell the brown stain
as my efforts shift the surface
the metallic taste becomes
almost overwhelming
like blood in the mouth
and I remember all those times
when I found the silver lining
hidden in the damaged and the dark
© Claire Griffin 2016
Excellent! Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thanks Andy 🙂
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